Okay, I'll admit I only found this because I was searching Teminite to see if his music was on this site. Sadly, all there is is mediocre remixes of his stuff, but I decided to click some to see if they were actually any good.
And holy crap I was blown away! I gotta admit I wasn't expecting anything to be this well done. You managed to completely change the feel of the song, adding your own melodies and drop, while keeping the Teminite feel. This is just so sick!!
Now, I gotta give criticism too. I am a complete newbie at production, but I think that what I say should be helpful anyway. There's one thing that's bugging me about the mix, and that's the kick. It's way too loud, and there's too much sidechaining, Especially at the buildups. It kinda hurts my ears to be honest.
Other than that, it sounds perfect to my untrained ears!
Yeah, I get the same criticism for this song a lot xD The side chain is a bit too powerful, and The kick is too loud. Thanks for the feedback tho mate :)
I REALLY love the melody of this song! Every now and then I'll hear a song that just has an exceptionally beautiful melody, and this is one of them.
Now I'm no expert on mixing, mastering, and sound design, but I'm not a big fan of the bass in the drop. It kinda sounds like it's overpowering my speakers, like in those mlg videos. I guess the high frequencies are too strong or something, idk. I'm sorry I can't offer any really helpful advice, but hopefully you can understand what I'm saying.
I also think the "never stop dreaming" is a little bit strange. The "s" in "stop" sounds off to me. I know that the voice is supposed to be glitchy/synthesized (I don't have a word to describe it...), but it seems just a little bit off.
The only other criticism I have is the end. The voice sounds SUPER cool, but it seems like the song has already ended, then surprise, there are five more seconds. I think the main issue I have with this is that the very last note is too short.
These are my opinions about the song, hopefully I've been helpful!
This song is way better than most songs used in GD!
Thank you very much for your comment! <3
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